A writer’s first line should open up a rib cage: "A screaming comes across the sky," T. Pynchon, Gravity's Rainbow; "The sun shone, having no alternative to the nothing new," Samuel Beckett's Murphy; "We started dying before the snow, and like the snow, we continued to fall," L. Erdrich, Tracks
The great writers begin their stories with a killer hook which migrates into distinct blocks of text which section out a larger piece of writing – paragraph(s):"The future is always changing, and we're all going to have to live there. Possibly as soon as next week," Hitchers's Guide Douglas Adams
“What is fueling your character’s desire - Acquisitiveness, Rivalry, Vanity, or Love of power?” .
Ever think about entering your work in a festival?
Plot Twist; The Hurt Delay; The Tale Told From Our Future; The Almighty Heart
Motivation runs out pretty quickly once we get to the nuts and bolts of the grind, but discipline, on the other hand, is about doing the task no matter what; So, Does your internal monologue play out on a television, in an attic, in your head, as a bickering Italian couple – or is it entirely, blissfully silent?